KUNDIMAN ng Kulang-Kulang


Kung 'di man magaling na photographer,
Maging astig na adobe photoshopper.

Kung 'di man professional singer,
Mag-videoke pero silent speaker.

Kung 'di man graceful dancer,
Daanin sa da moves like jagger.

Kung 'di man sexy at gifted ang body,
Be sporty and forever healthy.

Kung 'di man filthy rich o wealthy,
Magsikap at mag-invest intellectually.

Kung 'di man fluent english speaker,
Mag-aral at for sure you'll be better.

Kung 'di man smooth at flawless,
Ok lang kung always fresh.

Kung 'di man graduate sa exclusive school,
Keri lang basta ugali ay cool.

Kung 'di man ikaw ang laging most favorite,
Ayos lang 'pag may confidence and wit.

Kung 'di man so expensive ang clothes,
Pumormang facionista with ala-model pose.

Kung 'di man own ng mamahaling kotse,
Chill-chill lang sa Taxi, FX or Jeepney.

Kung 'di man bright or naturally brainy,
Be wais sa great na diskartee (pinilit mag-rhyme).

Kung 'di man IN sa famous cellphone.
Basta friendly and hindi alone.

Kung 'di man pretty or uberly handsome,
Good personality is the best charm.

Kung 'di man born na good writer,
Mag-online and be a blogger.

32 komento:

  1. I love this Senyor! Kaya nga ako nag blog kasi hindi ako good writer haha :)

    Dagdag mo pala to "kundi rin lang mag sasabi ng maganda, sa amin ay wag sumama. Chos nachos! :)

    TumugonBurahin
  2. haha, akala ko kantahan portion ang peg. loved this!

    TumugonBurahin
  3. Kung 'di man pretty or uberly handsome,
    Edi si Archieviner na. Pogi at gwapo, dyuk! lol

    TumugonBurahin
  4. Ako yata lahat yung kung di man...pero I Try my best in everything. I like this post, well thought of.

    TumugonBurahin
  5. Wow, mukang uso sayo ngayon ang gantong format ah. ;)

    Natawa ko sa una. Papasukin ko yan. HAHAH!

    Pati yung pangalawa.

    Yung pangatlo, hmmm. wala talaga akong talento sa dancing. lol pero sa moves like jagger. ehem HAHAH!

    yung sa wealth naman, tama to. Kelangan maging wise.

    HAHAH! Natawa ko sa freshness.

    Yung sa clothes naman, tama, nasa nagdadala naman kasi yan.

    "Kung 'di man bright or naturally brainy,
    Be wais sa great na diskartee (pinilit mag-rhyme)." HAHAHAHAH!

    Agree ako sa Kung 'di man born na good writer,
    Mag-online and be a blogger." Yeyyy!

    Way to go Senyor!

    TumugonBurahin
  6. parang na re- write mo na post ko sa comment mo ha... competing ka ba talaga kay mr tripster? lol

    Gusto ko sana mag- enumerate ulit kaya lang parang ganun latest post mong 'Pag-ibig'...bwahahaha...

    TumugonBurahin
  7. HAHAH! Im not competing with anyone, Im competing against myself, so I would become better than I was yesterday. HAHAH!

    Nyeee okay lang yon! HAHAHAH! Try mo nga din about pag ibig? ^_^

    TumugonBurahin
  8. ang saya lang ng poem na 'to
    lakas makapagbigay ng good vibes at hope! :)

    di nga naman lahat ay ipinagkakaloob sa isang tao,
    pero laging merong paraan to compensate our weaknesses o pagkukulang sa life :)

    TumugonBurahin
  9. ang dami kung tawa ah... ayos na ayos nga naman... madami pa namang way diba...hanapin mo kung saan ka gagaling... parang pag ibig wag pag siksikan ang sarili sa di ka mahal chos!

    TumugonBurahin
  10. Very nice:) it is funny too. Put smile on my face:)

    TumugonBurahin
  11. Naks ayos ito ah, hihi napasmile ako sa pilit irhyme? hihi..

    TumugonBurahin
  12. hakhak ayus to senyor ahh.. parang gusto ko tuloy gumawa ng ganireng format na tula.. (ingit?) haha ^_^

    TumugonBurahin
  13. at super relate ako dito

    Kung 'di man sexy at gifted ang body,
    Be sporty and forever healthy.

    bwahahahaha kasi sporty talaga ako mahilig akong kumain ng malunggay kaya pwedi na yang sa forever healthy!!

    and definitely ako rin ito

    Kung 'di man born na good writer,
    Mag-online and be a blogger.

    hehehehe

    ganyan lang ang buhay2x kung may hindi maganda sa ating buhay, hanapin ano ang best asset at yon ay dapat ienhance pa at alagaan para maging ka-asset2x pa lalo lol

    miss u teh!!

    TumugonBurahin
  14. Kung 'di man magaling na photographer,
    Maging astig na adobe photoshopper.
    -haha tama pwede din magaling mg photobucket haha

    Kung 'di man professional singer,
    Mag-videoke pero silent speaker.
    -isang bes pa lang ako nakatry neto! hilig ko music pero di ako marunong kumanta hahah

    Kung 'di man graceful dancer,
    Daanin sa da moves like jagger.
    -haha mas madali ang oppa gangnam style haha

    Kung 'di man sexy at gifted ang body,
    Be sporty and forever healthy.
    -hmmm di ako sexy di di ako sporty at healthy hahaha

    Kung 'di man filthy rich o wealthy,
    Magsikap at mag-invest intellectually.
    -siyang ideal na gawin haha

    Kung 'di man fluent english speaker,
    Mag-aral at for sure you'll be better.
    -ito ang dapat kong i focus haha

    Kung 'di man smooth at flawless,
    Ok lang kung always fresh.
    -well mejo vain ako kaya approve sakin to

    Kung 'di man graduate sa exclusive school,
    Keri lang basta ugali ay cool.
    -Like!

    Kung 'di man ikaw ang laging most favorite,
    Ayos lang 'pag may confidence and wit.
    -pampalubag loob ba to?

    Kung 'di man so expensive ang clothes,
    Pumormang facionista with ala-model pose.
    -guilty!

    Kung 'di man own ng mamahaling kotse,
    Chill-chill lang sa Taxi, FX or Jeepney.
    -may tama ka parekoy

    Kung 'di man bright or naturally brainy,
    Be wais sa great na diskartee (pinilit mag-rhyme).
    -daig ng madiskarte ang matalino!

    Kung 'di man IN sa famous cellphone.
    Basta friendly and hindi alone.
    -relate naman ako dito

    Kung 'di man pretty or uberly handsome,
    Good personality is the best charm.
    -buti na lang mabait ako

    Kung 'di man born na good writer,
    Mag-online and be a blogger.
    -swak na swak!

    TumugonBurahin
  15. i love this senyor!... nagra-rhyme talaga.. hindi naman masyadong halata na pilit yung isa hehe.. buti na lang lagi akong fresh hahaha!

    TumugonBurahin
  16. uso na talaga ang pahabaan ng comment hahahaha si MEcoy oh hahahaha

    TumugonBurahin
  17. Naalis ng may-ari ang komentong ito.

    TumugonBurahin
  18. Naalis ng may-ari ang komentong ito.

    TumugonBurahin
    Mga Tugon
    1. I agree, don't settle for second best:)

      Daddy Jay. Dinugo ako. Haba. Mr. Tripster asan kana? lol

      Burahin
    2. Si daddy jay kasi nagbura. Hahaha :P

      Burahin
  19. As much as I want to dissect (parang specimen lang sa bio class ng 2nd Year HS) every line of it, I will just focus on the generalization of it. But before that, of course, I will have to give this post a rating (naks - may rating na-- nag level up na ang comment ko) hahaha!

    Literary-wise, the attack is very entertaining, delightful, engaging and has the element of truth. It has a cross-generational appeal but thematically set to bring out a realization of achieving at a second best.

    I was just a bit bothered with these lines "Kung 'di man bright or naturally brainy, Be wais sa great na diskartee (pinilit mag-rhyme)." It breaks the format of an all-English rhyming words at the end of each stanza.

    As a self-acclaimed poet (haha!) I am applauding you on how you carefully stitches the words to end-up rhyme-measured. Overall - impressive that you can be a prose and poetry writer too. I'll give an A- for artistically blending of words.

    But the general tone of this post kinda bothered me at some point. It's like speaking of being a second best. And just settling to the idea of being a mediocre-dreamer. I see limitation of thoughts here. Somewhat a limitation of dreaming to achieve something. The "Kundiman" word sets the mood into a negative approach.

    As human beings, God gifts us with abundance -those gifts are within us. We just have to unleash it. We just have to discover it. I believe we can excel at anything we plan to do. It is all about setting our heart into it, passionately working on it and loving what we do. We only fail to achieve or accomplish something if we set out a run-of-the-mill approach – meaning when we do something we just settle to the idea of “pwede na eto” or “pasado na to”. We have to aim for a 100% output so that if we didn’t achieve it at least we still have the 99% down to look forward to.

    Everything can be done and can be learned. There is no such thing as a “dumb person” because of repetitive failures they are committing in relation to their endeavors. Failures are just delayed success (borrowed quote). I believe that sometimes we need to run through crossroads because it is a must. Plus our journey reaching the end (success) will be sweeter than having stride into a straight path. Crossroads are stumbling blocks that keep us to be at war with our limits but a little push is worth in the end.

    Finally, we should not limit our thoughts that we can do great. That we can be at our absolute best. That we can make things happen and that we can be a difference. And while aiming to be at our best let us not forget who we are as a person boiling down to examining our core beliefs.

    I thank you! hahaha!

    Magaling ka Senyor! All you need to do is to believe. Believing in yourself is tantamount to increasing your confidence. Do not be toppled by others or be eclipsed because you think others are better than you. Instead embraced the idea the if they can do it, you can do better.

    TumugonBurahin
    Mga Tugon
    1. I agree, don't settle for second best:)

      Daddy Jay. Dinugo ako. Haba. Mr. Tripster asan kana? lol

      *Inilipat ko lang ang comment ko. haha

      Burahin
    2. awww... kaka-tats... talagang himay na himay... nakakatuwa naman ang kaisipang iyong naibahagi...

      this is not the first time that after reading your comment, Parang nagi guilty ako...hahahaha

      hindi ko kayng pntayan ang comment mo na mas maganda pa sa post... maraming salamat daddy jay...

      Burahin
    3. hehe napaka-profound mo talaga sir jay! pareho kayo ni mr. tripster :)

      pa'no kaya kung magharap kayong dalawa sa isang debate?
      napakaganda sigurong pakinggan ang inyong mga sasabihin'

      more poems senyor! :)

      Burahin
    4. syempre speechless na naman ako sa longEST comment ni #thisguywillmakeyournosebleed ha ha

      at natawa ako sa nilipat na comment ni King A!

      Burahin
  20. Agree ako doon sa hindi man magaling na english speaker eh napag-aaralan naman ng mabuti. Yung ang sinasanay ko ngayon at sana ay maging fluent ako dahil kailangan sa pag-aaral at pagtuturo.

    TumugonBurahin
  21. I like it Senoyr..haha..like ko yung una..
    I knew it, Smart ka talaga.. you proved it once again..
    hirap kaya mag rhyming ng words..

    TumugonBurahin
  22. Ang galing! Very entertaining itong gawa mo senyor! This is what I like about your blog... hindi nakakasawa... always fresh and juicy!

    TumugonBurahin
  23. magaling naman!! like the thought!!
    infairview nakakarelate ako dito. hahaha.
    ay hindi lang ako. marami kami. hehehe.
    talent talaga!

    TumugonBurahin
  24. ha ha ha the best ka Senyor! maganda lahat ng rhyme kahit sabi mo yung isa pinilit. but pinaka-gusto ko yung title ;) more more!

    TumugonBurahin

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